“The Gift”

By Kimberley

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(Years ago, someone gifted me with the truth- you know who you are. Thank you.)

You were honest. Most of us were fine with that, as long as you stuck to telling the truth about yourself. I suspect you didn’t think it was fair to be the only transparent person in the room.When you pointed out how I frantically rearranged the living room furniture trying to make my pink elephants seem less conspicuous, I complained that your timing was all wrong. Not to mention your lack of tact. But, you were right, my elephants were stubborn: the element of surprise and ungracious manners were the only things that could have worked. Even while I was glaring at you for being the catalyst for the stampede of secrets wrecking my house I wanted to pat you on the back, bake your favorite cake, pin a medal to your hat. Damn, in those days I didn’t mention to people that their dysfunctions were peering at me from behind the curtains unless I was geographically unreachable. You’ve taken to keeping a nest of rasta hair and reading obscure philosophical treatises – for those trying to hide their “eccentricities” behind potted plants, you are still a disturbing presense balancing the truth on the tip of his tongue.

(Now I can make a peanut butter and jelly sandwich and settle down to read at Writer’s Island.)

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13 Responses to ““The Gift””

  1. Tumblewords Says:

    I want to laugh because I know people with these same attributes but at the same time, it’s not very humorous. :) Your writing style did this topic with class.

  2. Brian Says:

    Thanks for visiting and commenting. I hope you have fun blogging. 8O

  3. Ron Says:

    Honesty is a strange two headed monster sometimes. I don’t know two many people (me) that like inappropriately timed or ill mannered (tactless) honesty. Nice post.
    You mentioned being unable to comment on some blogs without a google account. I know my last bit of advice didn’t work out so good so I hesitate to give more of it….but here goes anyway.
    To comment on a Blogger account (now owned by Google)
    just scroll down (in the comment area) and click on ‘other’
    and two new boxes open for you to fill in….type your name in the first one and the url to your blog in the second one. That’s it!
    I think this time I got it right. Thanks.

  4. Lucy.R.E. Says:

    I’m intrigued, and looking forward to reading more of your work. I especially liked this line:
    “…I wanted to pat you on the back, bake your favorite cake, pin a medal to your hat.”
    I’ve always loved lists.
    Thanks for stopping by :)

  5. tinkerart Says:

    The truth can certainly sometimes be a hard gift to accept, even when it’s the one we most want. Great take on the prompt.

  6. gautami Says:

    Truthfulness is one of the greatest gifts but how many of us gift that? Your post is very thoughtful.

    You said something about not being able to comment on bloggers.

    There are three options on most blogs. Go to the other option. You can give your name and blog URL. And then comment.

    As an example, try mine first!

  7. Matthew Says:

    Why would you want to downplay the pink elephants:) ? It is a rare gift to find that person who is ruthlessly honest.

    As a follow-up to Ron’s comment there are some blogs on Blogger that will not allow you to comment without a Google account. (Depending on the owner’s settings) Other is simply not an option. I maintain a Google account just so I can comment on those blogs.

  8. Lea Says:

    Kimberley, this was fantastic. I loved your use of the pink elephant, especially the “stubborn elephants”… I have a few of those…

  9. Clare Says:

    Really great post! Truth can feel traumatic at the time, sometimes. But it can be a gift when it’s something we really need to hear — even if we only realize that much later.
    :)

  10. Kimberley Says:

    Thanks to all for your encouraging words.

    And thank you for trying to help me out with the blogger accounts. I think Matthew solved it for me – so a google account it is!

  11. Herb Urban Says:

    What a great post. It reminded me of battles I have waged with my brother. He always wants to hold a mirror up to others, but is unwilling to stand before it himself. How much useful advice can a person give if they are incapable of listening, or being truthful about themselves?

  12. Tammy Says:

    Hi Kimberly!
    I’m the gentle, honest friend who analyzes and sees but coaxes them to expose and chase out the elephant. lol Very creative take on the prompt.

  13. daisies Says:

    your writing makes me smile … large :)

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